Miss J's World

Friday, October 27, 2006

The Journey..2

Jeedo's mind was having an average of a hundred thought in a second; worrying, hoping, doubting, imagining... This all had got him to walk relentlessly from the second he stepped out of J World.

When he finally stopped it was almost noon and he suddenly felt exhausted. He had walked for many hours non-stop, because he was unaware of the time, busy thinking too much. He sat down on a rock for a while, trying to figure how far has he gone.
He could not tell exactly, but his J World did not appear in the horizon, he must have gone too far.

'Oh well! I was too anxious to get outside' he thought to himself.

'Am I moving?' It felt like he was. He looked down at his feet and Yes, he was moving.

It was the rock,it was rotating slowly. Jeedo stood up in panic, and in the following second the rock opened like a big monster's mouth and closed so fast, as if it was trying to have a bit bite.

'Oh my God ..OH MY GOD!!' Jeedo shouted 'I could have been swallowed by a ROCK!'
'Oh my God! What am I going to do?'

Despite his exhaustion, Jeedo started running away from the rock deep into the woods. He was going so fast that he ran into a tree and fell back. Jeedo passed out!

4 Comments:

  • reminds me of Lewis Carroll's Alice in Wonderland :)
    I'll wait to see how deep the rabbit hole goes...

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 1:14:00 AM  

  • i am lovin it.. cant wait for part III.
    you know how to leave us asking for more and more.

    But i think you should include more events in each part. am i Right?

    -identity-

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 4:35:00 PM  

  • Where is Part III!!

    -identity-

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 3:48:00 PM  

  • hey, where is part 3?

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 4:12:00 PM  

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